Read the extract from ‘Goodnight Mister Tom’ and then complete the activities.

Willie froze with the branch still held high in his hand. Sweat broke out from under his armpits and across his forehead. Now he was for it. He was bound to get a beating now. Tom came towards him, took the branch firmly from his hand and lifted it up. Willie automatically flung his arm across his face and gave a cry but the blow he was expecting never came. Tom had merely thrown the branch to the other end of the graveyard and the dog had gone scampering after it.

‘Yer can take yer arm down now, boy,’ he said quietly. ‘I think you and I ‘ad better go inside and sort a few things out. Come on,’ and with that he stepped aside for Willie to go in front of him along the path.

Willie walked shakily towards the cottage, his head lowered. Through blurred eyes he saw the tufts of grass spilling up between the small flat stones. The sweat trickled down the sides of his face and chest. His armpits stung savagely and a sharp pain stabbed at his stomach. He walked through the front door and stood in the hallway, feeling the perspiration turn cold and clammy. Tom walked into the front room and stood waiting for him to enter.

‘Don’t dither out there,’ he said, ‘come on in.’

Willie did so but his body felt as if it no longer belonged to him. It seemed to move of its own accord. Tom’s voice grew more distant. It reverberated as if it was being thrown back at him from the walls of a cave. He sat down on the stool feeling numb.

Tom picked up a poker and walked across to the fire. Now he was going the get it, he thought, and he clutched tightly onto the seat of the stool. Tom looked down at him.

‘About Sammy,’ he heard him say. He watched him poke the fire and then he didn’t hear any more. He knew that Tom was speaking to him but he couldn’t take his eyes off the poker. It sent the hot coke tumbling in all directions. He saw Tom’s brown wrinkled hand lift it out of the fire. The tip was red, almost white in places. He was certain that he was going to be branded with it. The room seemed to swim and he heard both his and Tom’s voice echoing. He watched the tip of the poker spin and come closer to him and then the floor came towards him and it went dark. He felt two large hands grip him from behind and push his head between his knees until the carpet came into focus and he heard himself gasping.

Tom opened the front window and lifted him through it.

‘Breathe in deep,’ Willie heard him say. ‘Take in a good sniff.’

He took in a gulp of air. ‘I’ll be sick,’ he mumbled.

‘That’s right, go on, I’m ‘olding you. Take in a good sniff. Let yer throat open.’

Willie drank in some more air. A wave of nausea swept through him and he vomited.

‘Go on,’ he heard Tom say,’ breathe in some more,’ and he was sick again and again until there was no more left inside him and he hung limply in Tom’s arms.

Tom wiped his mouth and face with the scarf. The pain in Willie’s stomach had gone but he felt drained like a rag doll. Tom lifted him back into the cottage and placed him in his armchair. His small body sank comfortably into the old soft expanse of chair. His feet barely reached the edge of the seat. Tom tucked a blanket round him, drew up a chair by the fire and watched Willie fall asleep.

Bronze: Summarise the extract – what happens in this part of the story?

Silver: Find a piece of evidence that suggests Willie is feeling scared. Why do you think he is afraid?

Gold: How do you think Willie feels about Tom? Explain your answer using evidence from the text.

Platinum: Write a diary entry about this incident from the perspective of either Willie or Tom.

38 responses to “Year 4 Reading Challenge Summer 2”

  1. Hadiya M.

    Bronze: WILLIE’S BODY FELT LIKE IT WAS GONE LIKE IT DISAPPEARED AND HIS VOICE STARTED GROWING WEIRDER AND MORE DIFFERENT THEN NORMAL.
    SILVER:sweat trickled down the sides of his face and chest. His armpits stung savagely and a sharp pain stabbed at his stomach. I THINK HE IS SCARED BECAUSE HE IS NEW.
    GOLD: I THINK WILLIE FEELS SAFE BECAUSE HE HAD BEEN HELPED BY TOM.😇👍🏻
    I did not do platinum😥 but I hope you still like the rest I put a bit extra detail to show I read the text:)🤗😀😁

  2. Jebrin Y.

    Bronze:
    1) Tom stopped Willie from hitting the dog with the branch and he took him home and watched him fall asleep. Willie fainted because Tom threantened him with a red hot iron poker from the fire.
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    Silver:
    1) “Willie walked shakily to the cottage , his head lowered” shows us that he is scared. I took him inside and warned him with my red hot iron poker. He passed out. Im pretty sure he was scared , just the look on his face!
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    Gold:
    1) I think that Willie is scared of Tom. When Tom caught him trying to hit his dog Willie thought Tom would hit him with the branch. Tom also put a red hot iron poker in Willies face causing him to pass out.
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    Platinum:
    1) Dear Diary
    “I saw the boy Willie trying to hit my dog in the Graveyard. I grabbed the stick and threw it away. Willie looked extremely scared of me . He thought i was going to hit him. When we walked back to my cottage he was shaking and sweating

  3. Zainullah S.

    Bronze:
    Willie gets sick and vomited twice.
    Silver:
    Willie was scared because he thought he was going to be beaten up.
    Gold:
    Willie feels safe because Tom saved him

  4. Rayan M.

    Bronze
    1. Willie was very nervous by freezing in place with the branch still held high in his hand.
    Silver
    Willie felt afraid with sweat running across his forehead and under his armpits.

  5. Adrian O.

    Dear Diary,
    I was very scared that Tom was going to give me a good beating but he didn’t. Multiple times he seemed like he was going to beat me but in the end he helped me because after vomiting a few times I felt better.
    I am very lucky I hope tomorrow is just as good.

  6. Hamida K.

    Bronze:
    They came somewhere where Willie got pushed by two men.Then Tom and Willie went out of the window and he put Willie in an armchair, He put a blanket on top of him and was waiting till he went to bed.
    Silver:
    He is scared because he said that he could hear himself gasping.
    Gold:
    Willie might think that Tom is bad because he might be thinking that the two men thing was a trap for him to fall in to.
    That’s why he was waiting for him to fall asleep.

  7. Emil D.

    Silver
    Because it said he flung his arm around his face and gave out a cry.
    Gold
    I think willie likes tom because tom tried to help him

  8. Sumaya O.

    Bronze

    willie froze still with the branch held high in his hand.

    Silver

    willie was in a graveyard.

  9. Yusuf S.

    Gold
    He begins petrified😧😫😰😱 but when he realised that he wassnt getting a beating he felt better and quite safe

  10. Yusuf S.

    SILVER
    He walked shakily as he thought he was going to get beaten up.

  11. Yusuf S.

    Bronze

    Willie thinks he is going to be beaten by Mr Tom. He is so petrified that he faints and vomits lots of time. But Mr Tom helps Willie by telling him to breathe and looks after him. Mr Tom is kind and calm towards Willie.

  12. Ranj M.

    Bronze
    Willie held high and he automatically flung his arm across his face.
    Silver
    Sweat broke from under his armpit and when that happens that normally means he is scared
    Gold
    He feels safe Becuase he has a good friend that actually cares about him and Tom helped him

  13. Chavi L.

    bronze
    Wille froze with the branch still high up in his hands

    silver
    Sweat broke from under his arm pits and across his fore head. Now he was for it.

    gold
    Safe because he is taking care of him and being kind

  14. Andreea-Maya M.

    Bronze
    Willie automatically flung his arms across his face
    Silver
    It’s says that Willie walked shakily towards the cottage

  15. Dean-Junior L.

    Wille automatically swung his hand across his face and willie held high

    Silver

    Sweat broke out from his under armpits he also walked shakily towards
    the cottage

  16. Tinuola T.

    Willie held high and he automatically
    flung his arm across his face.

    SILVER
    Sweat broke from under his armpit and he walked shakily towards the cottage.

    GOLD
    I think Willie feels proud of him and happy because he is so lucky to have a good friend who cares about him.

  17. gold

    willie feels safe because tom saved him

  18. Bronze

    “Take in a good sniff” he took in a gulp of air. “I am going to get sick.

  19. silver

    Sweat broke under his armpits.

  20. Rexford A.

    Bronze
    He was frozen while the the branch was in his hand.
    Silver
    Sweat broke under his armpits
    Gold
    Willie feels comfortable around Tom because he is being taken care of.

  21. Gift O.

    Bronze
    Tom came towards him, took the branch firmly from his hand and lifted it up.
    Silver
    Sweat broke from under his arm pits and across his fore head. Now he was for it
    Gold
    Willie feels happy about Tom because he helped Willie get down from the branch.

  22. Abigail F.

    Bronze
    1) Willie gets sick and vomited 2 times.
    Silver
    1) Willie walked shakily towards the cottage.
    Willie felt his body didn’t belong to him.
    2) Willie was in a graveyard.
    Gold
    Willie feels safe because when Willie was sick Tom cleaned him up and kept him safe.
    Platinum
    Dear Diary,
    Willie has been sick lately . He’s been frightened and has been sweating alot because he’s scared . He is tired after all that happened
    today.I always keep him safe. I hope Willie get’s better soon.

  23. Sumayyah A.

    “Take in a good sniff. ” he took in a gulp of air “I am going to get sick.”

    silver

    Sweat broke under his armpits.

  24. Esa A.

    Bronze
    “Take in a good sniff” he took in a gulp of air. “I am going to get sick.
    Silver
    Sweat broke under his armpits.
    Gold
    Safe because he is taking care of him.
    Platinum
    Dear diary,
    I have been taking care of Willie even though he was sick 🤕 2 times

  25. Safaa Y.

    Bronze:
    Wille frozed with the branch still high up in his hands
    Silver:
    Sweet broke under his armpits
    Gold:
    I think Willie feels safe because Tom helped him

  26. Sanaa M.

    bronze
    willie froze still with the branch held high in his hand.
    “come on boy” said tom.nausea came to willie and he started vomiting.tom put his hands on willie but he got sick again.
    silver
    sweat broke out from under willie’s armpit and across his forehead.
    gold
    willie feels safe because tom has taken good care of him.
    platinum
    dear diary,
    i have been taking care of willie when he was sick and he had nauseaand he vomited 2 times, even when he was about to get a beating.

  27. Sanaa M.

    i ave completed reading challenge bronze silver gold and platinum

  28. Zakariyah T.

    Bronze: Willie body felt like it wasn’t there his voice grew more different .
    Silver sweat broke under his armpits
    Gold: I think Willie feels safe because Tom helped him

    1. Zakariyah T.

      platinum
      dear diary,
      i have been taking care of willie when he was sick and he had nauseaand he vomited 2 times, even when he was about to get a beating.

  29. Aiza B.

    Bronze: Willie body felt like it wasn’t there his voice grew more different .
    Silver sweat broke under his armpits
    Gold: I think Willie feels safe because Tom helped him

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