Willie froze with the branch still held high in his hand.  Sweat broke out from under his armpits and across his forehead.  Now he was for it.  He was bound to get a beating now.  Tom came towards him, took the branch firmly from his hand and lifted it up.  Willie automatically flung his arm across his face and gave a cry but the blow he was expecting never came.  Tom had merely thrown the branch to the other end of the graveyard and the dog had gone scampering after it.

‘Yer can take yer arm down now, boy,’ he said quietly. ‘I think you and I ‘ad better go inside and sort a few things out.  Come on,’ and with that he stepped aside for Willie to go in front of him along the path.

Willie walked shakily towards the cottage, his head lowered.  Through blurred eyes he saw the tufts of grass spilling up between the small flat stones.  The sweat trickled down the sides of his face and chest.  His armpits stung savagely and a sharp pain stabbed at his stomach.  He walked through the front door and stood in the hallway, feeling the perspiration turn cold and clammy.  Tom walked into the front room and stood waiting for him to enter.

‘Don’t dither out there,’ he said, ‘come on in.’

Willie did so but his body felt as if it no longer belonged to him.  It seemed to move of its own accord.  Tom’s voice grew more distant.  It reverberated as if it was being thrown back at him from the walls of a cave.  He sat down on the stool feeling numb.

Tom picked up a poker and walked across to the fire.  Now he was going the get it, he thought, and he clutched tightly onto the seat of the stool.  Tom looked down at him.

‘About Sammy,’ he heard him say.  He watched him poke the fire and then he didn’t hear any more.  He knew that Tom was speaking to him but he couldn’t take his eyes off the poker.  It sent the hot coke tumbling in all directions.  He saw Tom’s brown wrinkled hand lift it out of the fire.  The tip was red, almost white in places.  He was certain that he was going to be branded with it.  The room seemed to swim and he heard both his and Tom’s voice echoing.  He watched the tip of the poker spin and come closer to him and then the floor came towards him and it went dark.  He felt two large hands grip him from behind and push his head between his knees until the carpet came into focus and he heard himself gasping.

Tom opened the front window and lifted him through it.

‘Breathe in deep,’ Willie heard him say.  ‘Take in a good sniff.’

He took in a gulp of air. ‘I’ll be sick,’ he mumbled.

‘That’s right, go on, I’m ‘olding you.  Take in a good sniff.  Let yer throat open.’

Willie drank in some more air.  A wave of nausea swept through him and he vomited.

‘Go on,’ he heard Tom say,’ breathe in some more,’ and he was sick again and again until there was no more left inside him and he hung limply in Tom’s arms.

Tom wiped his mouth and face with the scarf.  The pain in Willie’s stomach had gone but he felt drained like a rag doll.  Tom lifted him back into the cottage and placed him in his armchair.  His small body sank comfortably into the old soft expanse of chair.  His feet barely reached the edge of the seat.  Tom tucked a blanket round him, drew up a chair by the fire and watched Willie fall asleep.

Bronze: Summarise this text. What is it about?

Silver: Find evidence in the text to suggest Willie is feeling scared. Why do you think this?

Gold: How do you think Willie feels about Mr Tom and why?

Platinum: Write a diary entry showing Willie’s feelings.

58 responses to “Year 4 Reading Challenge- Summer 2”

  1. Sabiha K.

    Bronze
    This text resembles the true meaning of friendship, for two little boys are in their homes and one of them feels sick. The boy who feels sick is named Wille and the boy called Tom tries to help, by holding his hand and telling him to breathe in and out trying to make Wille to feel better.
    Silver
    The evidence in the text
    Willie froze with the branch still held high in his hand.
    Willie drank in some more air.  A wave of nausea swept through him and he vomited.
    Willie automatically flung his arm across his face and gave a cry but the blow he was expecting never came. 
    He felt two large hands grip him from behind and push his head between his knees until the carpet came into focus and he heard himself gasping.
    He took in a gulp of air. ‘I’ll be sick,’ he mumbled.
    Gold
    I think Willie is really, really happy that Mr Tom is there for him. As Mr Tom helped Willie, I think that Wille was really happy that Mr Tom was there for him and was really happy that Mr Tom helped him like a true friend.

  2. Zaynab M.

    Silver:
    I think Willie is feeling sad because In the text he has sweat That broke out under his armpits and across his forehead.
    Gold :
    I think Willie was feeling scared because he thought that Tom would hurt him.

  3. Nihal P.

    Bronze
    The text is about a boy called Willie and a man called Mr Tom. Wilkes was feeling sick and Mr Tom was helping him.

    Silver
    “Willie walked shakily towards the cottage” suggests that Willie was scared of Mr Tom. I think because Willie thought Mr Tom was going to hit him with the stick that he took off him.

    Gold
    At first Willie feels scared of Mr Tom, he thinks that he was going to hit him with the stick. He also thinks Mr Tom was going to burn him with the poker. At the end, he probably feels a bit better because Mr Tom helped him when he was sick.

  4. Irfa M.

    Bronze:
    This text is about Wille getting sick .But his good friend name Tom tried to help his poor friend.
    Silver:
    The evidence is:” I’ll be sick be sick ” he mumbled.

  5. Adam O.

    Bronze:
    This text is about willy Froze getting sick and a boy called Tom tries to help him.
    Silver:
    The evidence is that: Willie walked shakily towards the cottage and The sweat trickled down the sides of his face and chest.
    Gold:
    He feels scared because he thinks that Mr Tom will harm him.
    Platinum:
    Dear diary,
    Willie is scared because Tom was helping him from the fire branches.

  6. Muhammad I.

    Bronze – That there was a person that tried to help Willie
    This is about Willie Froze
    Silver – the evidence in the story is that Willie walked shaking and then it said that he took a gulp of air. “I will be sick ” he mumbled

  7. Muhammed G.

    The only threw a bone across the graveyard, and the dog collected it. He gave it back to him. He then walked across the graveyard to the cottage, where he felt very nauseous and sick hidden was sick, a couple of times, and was treated by the man in the cottage.
    The evidence in the text that suggests that Willie is scared is that he is shaking as he walking up to college. This indicates that he is feeling very scared coming into the cottage and knocking on the door. Another sign is that she took the Gulp of an air he was about to be sick. This means he made a very what you expect to usually expect to be scared, or the sound you make when you’re scared

    I think Willie was scared by Mr Tom, because when he went into the cottage, he was immediately sick, and he felt very intimidated by Mr Tom

  8. Amirah T.

    Bronze:
    A boy called Willie mate a man called Tom. But Willie was so worried that Tom would kidnap or murder him, that he vomited and fainted. In the end, Tom helped Willie and made sure that he was ok.

    Silver:
    Willie is feeling scared because he was sweating, he fainted and he vomited. This was because he was scared as he thought that he would get a beating from Tom.

    Gold:
    In the beginning, Willie felt scared of Tom because he did not know him, as he was a stranger that approached him. In the end, Willie thought that Tom was kind because Tom helped him.

    Platinum:
    (This diary entry is from Willie’s perspective.)
    Dear diary,
    Today I met a man called Tom, and I was scared that he would either murder or kidnap me. Actually, I was so scared, I fainted! He helped me and told me to keep on taking gulps of air and I vomited until I couldn’t anymore. I felt like I had no energy, like a ragdoll. It turns out that Tom was really kind!

    1. Amirah T.

      Bronze correction:
      A boy called Willie met a man called Tom.

  9. Zahra N.

    This text is about Willie Froze. This person got sick ad a caring boy named Tom helped Willie.
    Silver:
    Willie was scared because he mumbled to his mum saying that. “I’ll be sick”
    Gold:
    He felt scared because he thought Tom was gona hurt him so he got frightened.

  10. Alinna A.

    There is a person named Willie froze a boy hot really sick his name was tom then Willie helped him.
    Silver:
    The evenidce is because from the start of the 1 paragraph he was scared because he was high up amd he was sweating.

  11. Muhammad Y.

    Bronze
    The text is about a boy named Willie Froze.
    He got sick and Tom tried to help him.
    Silver
    He took in a gulp of air. ‘I’ll be sick,’ he mumbled Is the evidence.
    I think he is scared because he is probably thinking that Tom will do something that Wil hurt him for him to heal.

  12. Aiza B.

    Bronze
    This text is about a young boy named Willie froze and a man named tom.
    Silver
    The evidence to show that Willie is scared is that it says that he felt pain in is his stomach and he said “I’ll be sick .”he mumbled.
    Gold
    I think Willie feels scared about Mr tom Because he was thinking that Mr tom was his enemy and he thought he was going to get hurt by Mr Tom.

  13. Arhan Sarkar

    Bronze
    Willie and Tom set out for a mysterious medicine journey in a forest. Tom led Willie first but Tom was scared so Willie led Tom to an unknown . There they find a cottage and some woods. Tom had an matchstick so Tom set the woods on fire . Next, Tom got a poker and set that on fire. Willie was scared. Then they get into the cottage and open the window . Tom said gulp some fresh air Tom gulp some fresh air .Willie said Then I’ll be sick. Willie gulped some fresh air and vomited . Then Willie was fine . Willie was so happy about Tom.

    silver

    Willie felt scared because of these following feelings
    1. When Willie got towards the cottage his head lowered and he was shaking.
    2. The sweat trickled down of his sides of face and chest
    3. Willie’s armpits stung savagely and a sharp pain stabbed at his stomach
    4. Willie was perspired.

    Gold

    Willie felt about Tom that he was a stranger because he got Willie to an unknown place and thought that he will kill him because when Tom got fire in a poker he thought that Tom will set up him in fire.

    Platinum

    Dear diary,

    did you know what happened in this day! I was so scared when I was having a stomach ache. I felt more scared when Tom was going to an unknown place . I felt I was died when Tom set fire on a poker. I thought he was going to kill me but Tom was good he helped me and I got relief from the stomach ache . I was so happy and we became friends.

  14. Sheik A.

    It’s about a boy called willie froze who got sick and a boy called the top try to make him better
    The evidence is he gulped and he was shaking
    He was scared because he was his enemy

  15. Sheik A.

    It is about a boy called Willie froze he got sick and a boy called Tom try to help him to not get him sick and make him healthier

  16. Anaya R.

    Bronze:
    This text is about Willie froze. It is about Willie being sick and a boy called Tom tries to help him, but Willie is scared he will harm him.
    Silver:
    Willie is scared because it says in the text he was walking shakily and because he mumbled I will be sick.
    Gold:
    Willie is scared of Tom because he thought that Tom was going to harm him and because he thought Tom was his enemy.
    Platinum:
    Dear diary,
    I think Willie feels scared because he thinks Tom will harm him and because in the text it says “I was bound to get a beating now! ”
    In the text it also says that he was walking shakily and because Tom helped Willie from the fire branches.

  17. Zaynab M.

    This text is about Willie Froze . And a boy named Tom that helps Willie because he is cold and sick

    Silver :
    I know ther Willie is feeling

  18. Ammar W.

    Bronze
    Willie is scared as he thinks he will get beaten up now by Tom.

    Silver
    Willie froze when he thought he was going to get beaten up, he was sweating and he could not walk properly with fear.

    Gold
    Willie feels terrified and anxious because he thought Mr Tom might hurt him.

    Platinum

    Dear diary,
    Today was a very scary day for me because i thought Mr Tom was going to beat me up. I was so scared I froze in terror. I couldn’t even walk properly and I didn’t know when he was going to hurt me but i knew it was going to happen. I knew i wouldn’t be able to defend myself because I was frozen with fear and could not move.

  19. Osas O.

    Bronze- This text is about a boy called Willie being saved from a hot poker about to burn him.
    Silver- Willie might be scared because the text says that he walked shakily into the cottage.
    Gold- I think Willie feels that Mr. Tom is nice because he tucked a blanket around him and wiped his mouth and face with a scarf.
    Platinum-
    Dear Diary,
    Willie might think that Mr. Tom is nice and because of him he feels safe, he was respected as if he was Mr. Tom’s own child! At the start, he felt a bit scared but at the end, he felt a bit more comfortable.

  20. Madeeha T.

    The text is about willie froze. Willie froze was sick and Tom made him not feel sick.

    I think willie is feeling scared because in the text it said willie walked shakily to the cottage.

    I think willie is worried about Yom because he might think he is going to hurt him

  21. Ramandeep K.

    Bronze
    The text is about Willie. The text is about when Willie got sick a boy named Tom helped him.
    Silver
    The evidence is that it said, “Willie walked shaking. Also when he said “He took a gulp of air, ill be sick.
    Gold
    I think that Willie was slightly scared because he thought that Tom might hurt him or be his enemy.

  22. Hudayfa A.

    Bronze:
    This text is about someone named Willie Froze, he got a stick to protect himself from Tom. We are shown early on that Willie is scared of Tom, explaining him grabbing the stick for protection. Once Tom tells him he’s safe, he follows Tom to his cottage. They sit at a fire, Tom uses a poker to poke the fire, we can see that Willie is afraid of the red-hot poker. He is worried Tom will burn him with it. Due to his fear, he passes out, he wakes up feeling sick as Tom holds him out of the window to breathe. Once he is better, he sits in the armchair and sleeps.

    Silver:
    We have evidence that Tom is scared in the quote: “Willie automatically flung his arm across his face and gave a cry but the blow he was expecting never came.” This shows us that Willie was afraid of Tom hitting him.

    Gold:
    Willie thinks that Tom is a scary man because he was scared he was going to be hit.

  23. Mustafa A.

    Bronze
    The text is about a person called Willie and a man named Tom .
    Tom helps Willie not feel sick and Willie thought that Tom will hit him with a stick.
    Silver
    He took in a gulp of air. ‘I’ll be sick,’ he mumbled. he heard himself gasping.
    I this is because he feel his stomach felt sick.
    Gold
    I think he felt a little scared because he thought Tom was his enemy.

  24. Muhammad D.

    Bronze
    It is about a boy who was sick until a person called tom helped him to get the waves of nausea out so he can stop vomiting.
    Silver
    The evidence is he walked shakily to the cottage.
    Gold
    Thankful as he helped him.

  25. Aryan M.

    Willie froze got sick and a boy named tom helps him but thinks hes gonna get hit with a stick.
    He is scared because it says he walks shakingly . Willie feels anxious because he thinks tom is going to hurt him.

  26. Marwah K.

    Bronze:
    Willie held a branch and he froze sweat ran down his arms he was thinking about having a beating. Tom came towards him and took the branch firmly in his hands, willie automatically swung his arm without knowing with a cry he tearfully whimpered.
    Silver:
    He was feeling scared because he thought he would get pushed,punched,kicked and slapped or worse.
    Gold:
    I think willie thinks of tom as
    Rude
    ememy
    Stronger than him.

  27. Meena B.

    Bronze:
    This text is about Willie Froze. This person got sick but a boy called Tom tried helping Willlie.
    Silver:
    The evidence is that: It said that Willie walked shaking, and when it said He took a gulp of the air.” I’ll be sick” he mumbled.
    Gold:
    He felt scared because Willie thought that Mr Tom was his enemy and he was going to hurt him.
    Platinum:
    Willie is scared because Tom helped him from the fire branches and Tom made Willies’s stomach feel better than before.

    1. Afsa P.

      It’s about Willie froze he got sick and Tom helped him.
      Silver
      He took in a gulp of air and he mumbled that he will be sick and he felt upset and his tummy felt very very sick

    2. Amelia A.

      Bronze

      It’s about Willie and Tom. Willie was holding and a branch and Tom took it off him. Willies armpit was sweating because he was scared. Then, Tom took him into a cottage. Tom started a fire and Willie was sick. Willie fell asleep.

      Silver

      “He was bound to get a beating now” He is scared to get a beating from Tom.

      Gold

      I think Willie is scared of Tom because at the start when Willie was holding a branch and Tom took it off him but he thought Tom would hit him with the branch and put him in the cottage and dig him up.

  28. Simra S.

    BRONZE
    ———
    This text is about Willie froze .This boy got sick and the Tom boy helpebd to Willie.
    SILVER
    ——–
    He took in a gulp of air. ‘I’ll be sick,’ he mumbled. He was feeling were upset because he felt that his stomach was feeling so much sick .
    GOLD
    ——
    He felt lightly a bit scared because Willie thought that Tom was his enemy.
    PLATINUM
    ———-
    Dear Dairy,
    Willie is feeling scared because Tom helped him from the fire branchs .

  29. Manha S.

    BRONZE
    ———
    This text is about when tom helps Willie when he got sick.
    ——————————————————————–
    SILVER
    ——-
    He took in a gulp of air. ‘I’ll be sick,’ he mumbled. he heard himself gasping.
    I this is because he feel his stomach feel sick.
    ———————————————————————-
    GOLD
    ——
    He dosen’t feel comfertable because he thinks Mr Tom is his enemy.
    ———————————————————————-
    PLATINUM
    ———–
    Dear Dairy,
    I think Willie is being scared and frightened because while Tom was trying to help him get out of the fire branchs.

  30. Mopelola L.

    Bronze
    This text is about a boy named Willie with a man named Tom.Tom helps Willie not feel sick anymore and Willie thought Tom was going to hit him with a stick.
    Silver
    I think Willie is scared because in the text it says that he was sweating alot and he was walking shakily. I think he is scared because he thinks Tom will hurt him.
    Gold
    Willie feels uncomfturble and scared with Mr Tom because he thinks he is going to hurt him.

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