Willie froze with the branch still held high in his hand.  Sweat broke out from under his armpits and across his forehead.  Now he was for it.  He was bound to get a beating now.  Tom came towards him, took the branch firmly from his hand and lifted it up.  Willie automatically flung his arm across his face and gave a cry but the blow he was expecting never came.  Tom had merely thrown the branch to the other end of the graveyard and the dog had gone scampering after it.

‘Yer can take yer arm down now, boy,’ he said quietly. ‘I think you and I ‘ad better go inside and sort a few things out.  Come on,’ and with that he stepped aside for Willie to go in front of him along the path.

Willie walked shakily towards the cottage, his head lowered.  Through blurred eyes he saw the tufts of grass spilling up between the small flat stones.  The sweat trickled down the sides of his face and chest.  His armpits stung savagely and a sharp pain stabbed at his stomach.  He walked through the front door and stood in the hallway, feeling the perspiration turn cold and clammy.  Tom walked into the front room and stood waiting for him to enter.

‘Don’t dither out there,’ he said, ‘come on in.’

Willie did so but his body felt as if it no longer belonged to him.  It seemed to move of its own accord.  Tom’s voice grew more distant.  It reverberated as if it was being thrown back at him from the walls of a cave.  He sat down on the stool feeling numb.

Tom picked up a poker and walked across to the fire.  Now he was going the get it, he thought, and he clutched tightly onto the seat of the stool.  Tom looked down at him.

‘About Sammy,’ he heard him say.  He watched him poke the fire and then he didn’t hear any more.  He knew that Tom was speaking to him but he couldn’t take his eyes off the poker.  It sent the hot coke tumbling in all directions.  He saw Tom’s brown wrinkled hand lift it out of the fire.  The tip was red, almost white in places.  He was certain that he was going to be branded with it.  The room seemed to swim and he heard both his and Tom’s voice echoing.  He watched the tip of the poker spin and come closer to him and then the floor came towards him and it went dark.  He felt two large hands grip him from behind and push his head between his knees until the carpet came into focus and he heard himself gasping.

Tom opened the front window and lifted him through it.

‘Breathe in deep,’ Willie heard him say.  ‘Take in a good sniff.’

He took in a gulp of air. ‘I’ll be sick,’ he mumbled.

‘That’s right, go on, I’m ‘olding you.  Take in a good sniff.  Let yer throat open.’

Willie drank in some more air.  A wave of nausea swept through him and he vomited.

‘Go on,’ he heard Tom say,’ breathe in some more,’ and he was sick again and again until there was no more left inside him and he hung limply in Tom’s arms.

Tom wiped his mouth and face with the scarf.  The pain in Willie’s stomach had gone but he felt drained like a rag doll.  Tom lifted him back into the cottage and placed him in his armchair.  His small body sank comfortably into the old soft expanse of chair.  His feet barely reached the edge of the seat.  Tom tucked a blanket round him, drew up a chair by the fire and watched Willie fall asleep.

Bronze: Summarise this text. What is it about?

Silver: Find evidence in the text to suggest Willie is feeling scared. Why do you think this?

Gold: How do you think Willie feels about Mr Tom and why?

Platinum: Write a diary entry showing Willie’s feelings.

58 responses to “Year 4 Reading Challenge- Summer 2”

  1. Mohammed D.

    The story is about a boy called Willie who is scared of Tom because he thinks he will hurt him.

    Silver

    A wave of nausea swept through him and he vomited.

    Willie froze with a branch still in his hand.

  2. Minhaj A.

    bronze
    A boy called Willie has a really bad sickness but he had a friend called Tom
    and Tom who took care of him all the way through.
    Silver
    Willie was scared because Tom came towards him.
    Gold
    I think Willie thinks that tom is Tom is an nice and caring guy because he knew that he can help.

  3. Sayda A.

    This text is about a boy called Willie him
    and his friend called and Tom was going to hurt him
    Silver
    Willie was felling scared because he felt sick
    And he fought he was going to get hurt

  4. Myiesha S.

    Bronze: Summarise this text. What is it about?
    There was a boy named Tom and he helps Willie when he gets sick or hurt.
    Silver: Find evidence in the text to suggest Willie is feeling scared. Why do you think this?
    I think Willie is scared because he thinks that Tom is going to hurt him but actually helps him.
    Gold: How do you think Willie feels about Mr Tom and why?
    Willie feels to regret what he thought Mr Tom was because Mr Tom lifted his hand in the air to help Willie but Willie thought he was going to hurt him.
    Platinum: Write a diary entry showing Willie’s feelings.
    Dear Diary, 5.07.2023
    I feel bad the way i treated Mr Tom i wish i could have give him soemthing to say thank you for helping me.
    I wish i could find Mr Tom so i could say sorry before judging you at first.

  5. Khadijah M.

    Bronze:
    The story is about a boy called Wille. He was scared of a boy called Tom. Willie felt very sick but then Tom helped him.

    Silver:
    Willie froze.
    Sweat broke out from under his armpit and across his forehead.
    He had a sharp pain in his stomach.
    I think Willie was scared because of Tom.

    Gold:
    Willie thought Tom was going to hurt him.

  6. Nma M.

    Bronze:
    The text is all about a boy, his name was Willie. He had his friend with him named Tom, Willie was nauseous and got sick, then Tom made him feel better. Willie got better and Tom was glad he made his friend okay again and also happy.
    Silver:
    Willie was feeling scared because he thought Tom would hurt him and he would get hurt, but Tom kept him safe and happy.
    Gold:
    Willie was scared of Tom, but I think he feels safe, happy, confident and okay now, but at first he was a little shy and scared.

  7. Olivier T.

    bronze
    the text is about a boy called Willie who is scared of a boy called Tom he thought Tom was going to
    hurt him.
    silver
    willie froze.
    willie gave out a cry.
    willie walked shakily.
    the sweat trickled down his face and chest.
    he had a sharp pain in he’s stomach.
    gold
    he felt scared of Tom he thought he was going to hurt him.

  8. Ahmed O.

    wiileisaid fealsickof tomgothelp
    silver

    he is nervos and shy
    gold
    willie thinks tom will iose controll and hit him

  9. Lawan R.

    bronze
    wilile said i feel sick and then tom got help.
    silver
    he is nervous and shy
    gold
    wilile thinks tom will lose control and hit him.

  10. Keaton O.

    The text is about a boy called willie who is scared of a boy called Tom he thought Tom was going to hurt him.
    Silver
    Willie froze .
    Willie gave out a cry.
    Willie walked shakily.
    The sweat trickled down his face and chest.
    He had a sharp pain in he’s stomach.
    Gold
    He felt scared of Tom he thought he was going to hurt him.

  11. Aisha A.

    Bronze
    A boy named Willie was so scared of a boy named Tom Willie said I fell sick then Tom helped Willie get better.

  12. Welat M.

    Bronze:
    Willie said “I feel sick” then, got help from Tom.
    Silver:
    In the text it says “he walked shakily” so he was nervous and scared.
    Gold:
    Willie thinks that Tom will loose his temper and to hit hit/harm him.

  13. Bethany P.

    Bronze
    This text is a about a Boy called Willie and he thought Tom would hurt him but he actually helped him and helped Willie to not stress.
    Silver
    the word showing that Willie was scared is nausea because he got so nervous and scared about Tom hurting him that he felt nausea and threw up

  14. Khadeeja M.

    Bronze
    Summarise this text. What is it about?
    This book is about a boy called Willie froze that gets sick and a boy called Tom tries to help him but Willie refuses him because was scared if Tom would harm him.Tom was not harming him he was trying to make him feel better and not sick any more.

  15. Harrison S.

    Bronze
    The text is about a boy called Willie who felt sick and Tom helped him by putting him out the window to breathe air so he can be sick.
    Silver
    Willie walked shakily to the cottage because he was scared and didn’t want to get hurt.
    Gold
    Willie might have felt scared that he might get hurt by Mr Tom.

  16. Emmanuel Lawrence

    Bronze
    The text is about a boy named Willie who thinks is going to get beaten up
    but actually gets helped
    Silver
    I know he’s feeling scared because it said Willie thought he was going to get beaten
    GOLD
    I think Willie felt scared about Mr Tom at first because he did something wrong

  17. Ahmad R.

    Bronze
    This text is about a boy called Willie who thought he was going to get a beating from Tom. Tom is actually someone who tries to help Willie calm down and is nice to him.
    Silver
    It says in the text “ Sweat broke out from under his armpits and across his forehead” and “ Willie walked shakily”.

  18. Amina J.

    BRONZE:
    A boy named Willie was terrified by Tom. Willie said “I feel sick.” Then he had help from Tom.
    SILVER:
    The evidence in the text is: Willie walked shakily towards the cottage.I think this because the word
    “shakily”means that he was afraid of Tom.
    GOLD:
    He felt scared because he thought that Tom was going to hit him.

  19. Hussein H.

    Bronze
    This text was based on a person called Willie Froze and how he became ill and a boy Tom did his best helping him.
    Silver
    The evidence is that he said ‘ He took in a gulp of air. ‘I’ll be sick,’ he mumbled.’ Probably talking about his stomach ache.
    Gold
    Willie felt a bit frightened because he had a bad feeling about Tom and thought he might harm him.

  20. Sulaimon L.

    Bronze
    This text is about a boy called Wille when he got sick and Tom helped him.
    Silver
    The evidence that tells us that Wille is scared is -Wille took a Gulp of Air.
    Gold
    I think Wille is happy with Mr Tom Because he gave Wille a place to stay and helped him Get Warm again.
    Plantinum
    Dear Diary,
    Yesterday I was afraid that someone was going to eventually find me and I was going to get in alot of trouble and I wish that I wouldn’t get in trouble Because I was also stuck and couldnt free my self But Luckily Mr Tom came to my rescue and dint hit me and made me warm because Outside was horriblly cold.

  21. Muazzan M.

    Bronze:
    This text is about a boy named Willie he got sick and Tom helped him
    Silver:
    ‘Go on,’ he heard Tom say,’ breathe in some more,’ and he was sick again and again until there was no more left inside him and he hung limply in Tom’s arms.

  22. Haarun M.

    Bronze
    This text is about a girl called wille froze is that is too harmed so a guy helps the girl

  23. Amina H.

    Bronze
    The text is about Willie Froze. Willie Froze got sick.A boy called Tom is trying to make her feel better.
    Silver
    The evidence is she walked shakily.I think this because she might feel be more sick.

  24. Janelle O.

    Bronze
    This text is about Willie who has blurred eyes so he saw blurred stuff.
    Silver
    It was because his body felt numb and couldn’t really feel their body.
    Gold
    Anxious because he doesn’t know what might happen to him and he might be so scared he could cry.
    Platinum
    Dear diary,
    I know that Willie might be so anxious because his eyes were blurred his body was like numb and he couldn’t feel anything. I wouldn’t like it if someone else had to go through that.

  25. Yoshita P.

    Bronze:
    The text is about a boy called Willie who got sick when he put his head out of the window in the cottage and Tom tried to help Willie and then in the end Tom put Willie in the arm chair and he fell of to sleep.

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