Year 3’s English Home Learning 10.03.23 – Broad Heath Primary School

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Nabiha I. says:

14/03/2023 at 5:54 pm

Activity 1:
Grany :Grany quitly lurks behind Ben,starting as he eats a spoonfull of cabage soupwith a grimance on his face .(attentively)”How is your cabage soup Ben “,? (unhappily)” Verry good “, said Ben.

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Yasmin A. says:

12/03/2023 at 5:23 pm

I have completed my English work

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Hamza M. says:

10/03/2023 at 6:18 pm

Granny quietly lurks behind Ben,staring as he eats a spoon full of cabbage soup with a grimace on his face .
Granny: (attentively) How is your cabbage soup Ben?
Ben: (helplessly) It’s good .
Granny: (excitedly) Oh well I should give you more I guess?
Ben:(immediately) No thanks, I’m a bit cabbaged up.
Granny:(calmly) There are some cookies in the jar,do you want to have some?
Ben:(energetically) Runs towards the kitchen and instead of cookies ,he found shiny jewels in the tin.

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Hishaam G. says:

10/03/2023 at 5:59 pm

I done my Eenglish work on a paper

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1. Miss Jephcott says:
  
  10/03/2023 at 8:14 pm
  
  That’s okay Hishaam. Please could you bring this in Monday so I can have a look 😊
  
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Hishaam G. says:

10/03/2023 at 5:56 pm

I have done my Eenglish work

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Havin A. says:

10/03/2023 at 4:39 pm

Gran stares at Ben having a spoon full of cabbage soup with a grimace on his face
(Attentivley) How is ur cabbage soup said Gran happily
(Worriedly) g.great said Ben its really nice
(Excitedly ) oh goody squeaked Gran I have some more in my pan
(Disgustedly ) wow more I’m in heaven.. said Ben sadly

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Tinuola T. says:

10/03/2023 at 3:59 pm

I am doing everything on a piece of paper

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1. Miss Jephcott says:
  
  10/03/2023 at 8:15 pm
  
  That’s okay Tinuola. Please can you bring this in Monday so I can have a look 😊
  
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Rayan M. says:

10/03/2023 at 3:20 pm

Granny quickly lurks behind Ben, staring as he eats a spoonful of the cabbage soup with a grimace
on his face.
Granny (attentively) how is the cabbage soup Ben?
Ben( softly ) It’s fine, grandma it tastes lovely.
Granny ( gently ) Oh its that so!
Ben ( clearly ) YEP!
Granny ( quickly ) I’ll make some more cabbage soup for you then.
Ben ( quietly ) I don’t want any more.

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Ilyas K. says:

10/03/2023 at 3:01 pm

Challenge

Ben: (suddenly) No! Gran Stop!
Granny: (nervously) Ben. What are you doing here?
Ben: (loudly) I found the jewels in the biscuit tin. What are you doing?
Granny:(quietly) Get back and be quiet someone will hear you.
Ben: (shockingly) Are you going to steal those jewels from the shop?
Granny: (carefully) Meet me on Sunday morning watch out so nobody sees you.

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Ilyas K. says:

10/03/2023 at 2:48 pm

Granny: (attentively) How is the cabbage soup Ben?
Ben: (quietly) It’s quite nice Gran.
Granny: (gently) Would you like some chips and fish fingers instead?
Ben: (excitedly) Yes please! Can I help peel the potatoes?
Granny: (immediately) Of course you can. Let’s get started.
Ben: (energetically) Yes!

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Esa A. says:

10/03/2023 at 2:11 pm

activity 1
Granny:( attentively) How is your cabbage soup Ben?
Ben:(calmly) it is good grandma I like it.
Granny:(passionately) oh, if you like it have some more then.
Ben:(clearly) Not right now; may be later.
Granny:(gently) ok that is fine.
Ben:(loudly) I am going to sleep because I feel tired.

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1. Miss Jephcott says:
  
  10/03/2023 at 2:17 pm
  
  Good job Esa! Try to remember that you start dialogue off with a capital letter, even after a stage direction. Have a go at the challenge for me Esa? The scene of Granny’s robbery using stage directions and dialogue.
  
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Hadiya M. says:

10/03/2023 at 2:10 pm

Activity 1:
Granny quietly lurks behind Ben,staring as he eats the spoonful of cabbage soup with a grimas on his face ( attentively ) How is your cabbage soup Ben? Ben: ( Nervously ) good nearly finish it is amazing.
Gran: ( excitedly ) good because I have more waiting for you!
Ben: ( nervously ) yay more.😥😥😮😮
Gran: ( normally ) good to here.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊and
Gran: ( excitedly ) let’s play scrabble after you finish.
Ben: ( Nervously ) ok sure why not hehehe.😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮

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1. Miss Jephcott says:
  
  10/03/2023 at 2:20 pm
  
  Well done Hadiya! Next step: Try and use alternative adverbs than ‘nervously’.Remember to always start dialogue off with a capital letter, even after a stage direction. Try and have a go at the challenge for me? Write a scene for the picture of Granny stealing, using stage direction and dialogue 👍☺️
  
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Rexford A. says:

10/03/2023 at 12:50 pm

Stage direction tells how the actor has to act
A dialogue punctated is a play script no inverted commas used
Granny lurking behind Ben,staring as he eats the spoonful of cabbage soup with a grimas on his face.Granny: (attentively) do you like your cabbage soup Ben? Ben: (neversouly) yes gran it’s amazing as he secretly tips it away! Gran: (excitedly) Let me get the pot and pour some in the bowl! Ben: (clearly) Maybe later gran. Gran: (suddenly) let’s play scrabble! Ben: (awkwardly) Umm sure I guess…

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1. Mrs Farooq says:
  
  10/03/2023 at 1:10 pm
  
  Excellent work Rexford and great use of adverbs! You have correctly written out a playscript including character names and stage directions.
  Challenge – act this scene out with a parent/sibling/friend and use varying tones to your voices.
  
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Eva T. says:

10/03/2023 at 12:46 pm

Ben:(Nervously)”the cabbage is great “
Granny:(nicely)”Oh good “
Ben:(quietly)”that is disgusting “
Granny:(excitedly)”Another spoonful then”

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Toleen S. says:

10/03/2023 at 10:45 am

Activity 1
Granny quietly lurks behind Ben staring as he eats a spoonful of cabbage soup with a grimace on his face.
Granny: (attentively) how is your cabbage soup?
Ben: (disgustedly) amazing yep it’s uhh fine.
Granny: (delighted) good,good
Ben:( relieved ) few I’m done bye!
Granny (pleased) no take another plate of my scrumptious,delicious cabbage soup.
Ben: ( annoyed) no Thank you granny,oh umm uh let’s play wholly game of scramble instead.

Challenge
Granny: (happily) I’m gonna smash this 321 .
Ben: (nervously) STOP don’t do it granny these are expensive,gold jewelery.
Granny:(quietly) what are you doing here.
Ben:(knowingly) I saw you with the jewels there in the gold,shiny biscuit box.
Granny:(secretly) meet up at sunday.
Ben:(exitedly) ok bye granny.

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1. Miss Holland says:
  
  10/03/2023 at 10:51 am
  
  Great effort Toleen! Remember to always start dialogue off with a capital letter, even after a stage direction. Next steps: Set the scene of Granny’s robbery. Write 3 sentences describing the scene and what Granny is doing.
  
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Eliza N. says:

10/03/2023 at 9:59 am

What are stage directions?
A stage direction is written for actors to help them get a understanding of what to do on stage on where , how and what tone or action they should be doing when performing .
Activity 1- Finish the dialogue below.
Granny quietly lurks behind Ben, staring
as he eats a spoonful of the cabbage
soup with a grimace on his face.

Granny : (attentively) How is your cabbage soup
Ben? (Nervously) It’s lovely Gran thanks.
Granny: (immediately) Ahh good shall I get you another bowl Ben?
Ben: (Anxiously) Maybe later Gran.
Granny: (Excitedly) Oh well , shall be play scrabble then?
Ben:(Hesitantly) Umm if you like?

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1. Miss Redhead says:
  
  10/03/2023 at 10:03 am
  
  Some good stage dirextion Eliza, make sure you start them with a capital letter. I like the use of the word ‘attentively’ can you tell me what this word means?
  
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  1. Eliza N. says:
    
    10/03/2023 at 11:18 am
    
    Attentively means listening carefully or giving careful attention like listening to a story.
    
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    1. Miss Holland says:
      
      10/03/2023 at 11:19 am
      
      Great definition Eliza!
      
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Eesaa A. says:

10/03/2023 at 9:58 am

Ben:(Awkwardly)Yeah it’s really good.
Granny:(Happily)Oh goody I’ll make more.
Ben:(nervously) I feel a bit cabbaged out,is there anything else but cabbage.
Granny:(sadly) There is a tin of biscuits in the cupboard.
Ben:(excitedly)Ok!
Challenge
At this scene you see a suspicious granny looking at jewellery in a black suit looks like when no one is watching she is going to steal it right away.Granny:(suspiciously)I’m going to steal this jewellery when no one is watching.I can do this. It is so weird why a granny is doing stealing.it looks like she is taking necklaces from a jewellery shop.There is a dark scooter 🛵 for a granny.

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1. Miss Redhead says:
  
  10/03/2023 at 10:01 am
  
  Some great stage directions here Eesaa.
  
  Look the the line: Oh goody I’ll make more. What punctuation could you add here to improve it?
  
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